ADVICE NEEDED: Re-edit and reupload underperforming YouTube video?

Hey everyone – would appreciate some advice on an underperforming video.

I recently uploaded a Star Wars-related video that I expected to do much better but its performance has been underwhelming. Looking at the audience retention stats, there is a HUGE drop-off at the beginning of the video where there is a wordy intro sequence in the format of the Star Wars scroll. Following this intro, the main portion of the video gets much better retention.

My question: Should I remove this video and…

ADVICE NEEDED: Re-edit and reupload underperforming YouTube video?